Ielts Writing Task 2 Sample Reply Band 9
Most stereotypes are never totally expunged because they are deeply ingrained in how society views certain races. While I can not easily change the minds of the numerous, I can change the thoughts of my very own. At first glance, all I saw were measures of black ink permanently etched into the sheet – resistant to change. How do I add to a composition that exudes such a definitive nature? Beyond the notes, past the rhythms, I seen white space – unblemished and ready for me to create my very own contribution. Once I stopped and determined what I wanted somebody to really feel from this composition, I picked up my pencil and wrote in crescendos, decrescendos, breath marks, and other musical markings that I felt needed to be included.
Then I have two balanced body paragraph discussing either side. As far as I see, the mannequin essay above was written in response to “To what extent do you agree” query, but the structure somewhat is similar to “do adv-s outweigh disadv-s”. Exactly proper